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Riverview Moderator ([personal profile] riverviewmod) wrote 2017-03-07 08:08 am (UTC)

REVISIONS



revisions

Thank you for your application! Before it can be fully processed, a bit of additional information and clarification is required. Please complete the following revisions within 48 hours and submit them in a reply to this comment.


● While Riverview doesn't generally nerf abilities, in Shigeru's case, he seems to have a wide variety of very powerful abilities that fall under a lot of very different umbrellas. Please either nerf some or restructure his abilities to be more cohesive and less overpowered.
● While what you have written is very good, please flesh out the strengths and weaknesses sections to add a bit of detail. Under 300 words per section is still fine, but a little more detail would help us better understand the character.
● If you have any questions or need clarification, please feel free to contact the moderator for help.

we hope to see you soon

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