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Riverview Moderator ([personal profile] riverviewmod) wrote 2017-11-11 08:33 am (UTC)

REVISIONS



revisions

Thank you for your application! Before it can be fully processed, a bit of additional information and clarification is required. Please complete the following revisions within 48 hours and submit them in a reply to this comment.


● The Strengths and Weaknesses sections you have provided are very focused on his abilities. These sections are meant to address the character's personality. Please revise to limit discussion of his magic use to the abilities section, and flesh out the description of his personality strengths and weaknesses.

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